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☻MakeaStory☻

Post  Guest on Tue Nov 02, 2010 9:36 am

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✰Make a Story!✰
Here's how it goes...
Each person who posts a reply must type in a sentence. Then the next person to reply must type in another sentence that goes with the first sentence Wink Here's an example
✧Person 1: The white wolf trotted down the hill and made his way to the river for a drink.
✧Person 2: He lapped his pink tongue onto the cool river water.
✧Person 3: Then suddenly, he heard a twig snap and saw a small squirrel in the bushes

Its real simple. After every week, I probably will type in all of the sentences to see what kind of a story we made. Dostluck and Kodiak: Is this o.k? Does this break any rules? Or should this be moved to UserWritings Question or any other topic?

Here's the first sentence...

❄️The young female wolf trotted through the forest in search of prey.❄️

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:13 pm

She ran through the forest, keeping her eyes on the ravens black form. And suddenly it stopped and circled in the air

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:26 pm

She stopped keeping her eyes on it. "Whats wrong?" She asked.

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:34 pm

The raven cawed and continued circling when she saw the cliffs in front of her

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:35 pm

She looked up at the Mountains, "Its to high" She gasped.

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:39 pm

Suddenly she heard a rumble and she looked up with a gasp to see a bunch of rocks falling from the mountain straight at her

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:41 pm

She ran away from them as fast as she cold. The rocks were right behind her tail. The Raven flew above her.

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:45 pm

Suddenly the raven turned sharply to the right and she followed, right over the edge of a small cliff...

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:47 pm

She fell down the cliff and in to the sea. The raven flew over to her where she fell.. Her head didn't apear..

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:48 pm

The raven dived down toward the sea where her head erupted from the water, gasping and choking. "Help me!" she cried as her head went under again

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:53 pm

The Raven flew around looking for help, panicking. Suddenly a Grey wolf swimmed over to her and helped her to land.

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:55 pm

She opened her amber eyes to see im looking at her. "Who are you?" they asked each other at the same time

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:58 pm

The grey wolf stopped. "You first" She smiled.

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:00 pm

"Im Soul" the female said to the grey wolf, "now you"
(I wasn't sure whitch one you were talking about)

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:04 pm

(The main character of this story is a white wolf, Soul)

"I'm Jazz" She Replied with a smile. The raven flew over to Soul, Happy she was safe. It glared at Jazz.

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Post  Guest on Wed Nov 03, 2010 6:43 pm

Jazz noticed the raven circling above them and he growls and jumps to catch it thinking that it is trying to attack them. The raven thinks that Jazz is going to hurt Soul so it dives at Jazz with a glare in it's eyes. "No!" Soul yells.

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Post  Guest on Thu Nov 04, 2010 10:19 am

Soul growled softly at the raven, making it avert its course of attack. It landed on a branch and began to re-arrange its feathers.

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Post  Guest on Thu Nov 04, 2010 12:32 pm

"Sorry" Jazz said shyly. "Its alright" Soul told him.

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Post  Guest on Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:14 pm

Jazz backed away and let Soul stand up, she saw the dark ocean stretch further than she could see, and the sun was setting into the dark water. "Well what now?" she grumbled to the raven.

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Post  Guest on Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:49 pm

The raven crowked and flew in to the air. "I guess i must follow it" She thought. She turned to follow the raven until Jazz stopped her. "Wait! Where are you going?" he asked. "To find my brother" She told him. "Can i come along?" He asked. She smiled and nodded. The two wolves set off as they followed the black bird in the sky.

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Post  Guest on Thu Nov 04, 2010 7:18 pm

Soul and Jazz followed the raven through the hills, it would swoop back towards them to see if they were there. Soon a forest opened up, the sun was gone and the night time darkness made the forest look even more scary.

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Post  Guest on Fri Nov 05, 2010 10:43 am

The crow crawked and flew to the ground. "Whats the matter?" Jazz asked the Raven. "I think he's tired.. Lets get some rest" Soul told him. Jazz nodded and went over to a big tree, He found a den inside it, unused. Soul followed him with the Raven in her mouth carefully.

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Post  Guest on Fri Nov 05, 2010 10:54 am

Souls dreams soon took over. She was running in a field covored with mist, she couldn't see anything in front of her.

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