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Post  Guest Tue Nov 02, 2010 9:36 am

First topic message reminder :

✰Make a Story!✰
Here's how it goes...
Each person who posts a reply must type in a sentence. Then the next person to reply must type in another sentence that goes with the first sentence Wink Here's an example
✧Person 1: The white wolf trotted down the hill and made his way to the river for a drink.
✧Person 2: He lapped his pink tongue onto the cool river water.
✧Person 3: Then suddenly, he heard a twig snap and saw a small squirrel in the bushes

Its real simple. After every week, I probably will type in all of the sentences to see what kind of a story we made. Dostluck and Kodiak: Is this o.k? Does this break any rules? Or should this be moved to UserWritings Question or any other topic?

Here's the first sentence...

❄️The young female wolf trotted through the forest in search of prey.❄️

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Post  Guest Tue Nov 02, 2010 6:37 pm

The wolf doesn't reply, it only stands in front of her with its black pelt blending with the shadows

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:08 am

The wolf opened its mouth to speak, only to be whisked away by a light wind the blew, leaving nothing but dust.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:11 am

The wolf stepped closer and finaly spoke, "I am your long lost brother, I am searching for you." he told her. She gasped. "Why are you talking to me in my dreams?" She asked.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:13 am

' Because... I cannot be with you now.' The wolf said, his golden coloured eyes almost speaking for him.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:15 am

"Why? Are you dead?" She asked with a shocked tone.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:17 am

' No... just far away. You must follow the black ravens...' a large, pitch black bird appeared by his side, hovering just above a branch and cawing loudly. ' To find me.' he finished.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:19 am

"I will follow the bird, And find you with all my might!" She told him. Her eyes sparkled.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:24 am

The black wolf nodded. ' I must warn you of the many perils you may come across, some that you may find easy to overcome, some you may not...'

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:28 am

The wolf suddenly disapeared. She woke up and looked up at the branch of the tree. Their stood the Raven.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:29 am

It cawed loudly, and spread its large wings. The wolf got up and got ready to run after it.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:31 am

She followed it in to the deep part of the forest, None stop.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:32 am

It slewed to a halt, hovering above a large carcass of Bison. She licked her lips and moved towards the meat.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:38 am

She ran over to the Carcass and suddenly realised she was in another pack territory. She heard growling.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:39 am

The raven started pecking at the eyeballs, taking no notice of the soft growling from the pack wolves or the wolf he was supposed to be protecting.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:41 am

She backed away as 7 wolves ran towards her baring their teeth.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:42 am

' What do you want?' they hissed, their muscles bunching and realising as they advanced towards her.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:44 am

"I need to follow that Raven!"She squeaked.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:46 am

The one that seemed to be the leader glanced over at the raven, fear instantly hitting her like a wave.
' Ruuuuun!' she yelped.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:47 am

She ran past them and shouted. "GO!" She screamed. The raven flew off again with her racing behind it.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:51 am

After a few minutes of all-out running, she came to a halt under the shade of a tree.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:51 am

The raven stopped and flew on to a branch and pecked at a ant.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:53 am

' Y... You... you lead me there!' she growled, laying her ears back.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 10:57 am

The raven looked at her frightendly, He jumped on to the ground.

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 12:47 pm

The raven gained a little courage, and pecked her on the nose. She yelped. (and did a Toboe)

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Post  Guest Wed Nov 03, 2010 1:05 pm

She growled angrily at it. "Take me to my brother!!" She growled. The raven nodded and jumps back in to the air. She followed, still growling a bit.

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