☻MakeaStory☻

First topic message reminder :

Here's how it goes...
Each person who posts a reply must type in a sentence. Then the next person to reply must type in another sentence that goes with the first sentence Here's an example
✧Person 1: The white wolf trotted down the hill and made his way to the river for a drink.
✧Person 2: He lapped his pink tongue onto the cool river water.
✧Person 3: Then suddenly, he heard a twig snap and saw a small squirrel in the bushes

Its real simple. After every week, I probably will type in all of the sentences to see what kind of a story we made. Dostluck and Kodiak: Is this o.k? Does this break any rules? Or should this be moved to UserWritings or any other topic?

Here's the first sentence...

The young female wolf trotted through the forest in search of prey.

She ran through the forest, keeping her eyes on the ravens black form. And suddenly it stopped and circled in the air

The raven cawed and continued circling when she saw the cliffs in front of her

Suddenly she heard a rumble and she looked up with a gasp to see a bunch of rocks falling from the mountain straight at her

Suddenly the raven turned sharply to the right and she followed, right over the edge of a small cliff...

The raven dived down toward the sea where her head erupted from the water, gasping and choking. "Help me!" she cried as her head went under again

She opened her amber eyes to see im looking at her. "Who are you?" they asked each other at the same time

"Im Soul" the female said to the grey wolf, "now you"
(I wasn't sure whitch one you were talking about)

(The main character of this story is a white wolf, Soul)

"I'm Jazz" She Replied with a smile. The raven flew over to Soul, Happy she was safe. It glared at Jazz.

Jazz noticed the raven circling above them and he growls and jumps to catch it thinking that it is trying to attack them. The raven thinks that Jazz is going to hurt Soul so it dives at Jazz with a glare in it's eyes. "No!" Soul yells.

Soul growled softly at the raven, making it avert its course of attack. It landed on a branch and began to re-arrange its feathers.

Jazz backed away and let Soul stand up, she saw the dark ocean stretch further than she could see, and the sun was setting into the dark water. "Well what now?" she grumbled to the raven.

Soul and Jazz followed the raven through the hills, it would swoop back towards them to see if they were there. Soon a forest opened up, the sun was gone and the night time darkness made the forest look even more scary.

Souls dreams soon took over. She was running in a field covored with mist, she couldn't see anything in front of her.